The
shark that was responsible for two recent deaths has been caught and killed.
Beaches will reopen immediately. Island residents and guests alike are
encouraged to return to the water.
Me and Writing have had a long, tumultuous relationship. There have been poems of passion, love songs and nostalgic stories for as long as I can remember. At times it can be trying and frustrating and I've even thought about ending it. But I know I could never leave Writing behind. It's too much a part of me.
Monday, May 6, 2013
Town Meeting Outrage
Yesterday’s
town meeting yielded an eruptive response from those who attended, as the cause
of the two recent deaths and what course of action to take was discussed. Police
Chief Martin S. Brody suggested summer police staff be called in as early as
possible and that shark spotters be present at the beaches.
When
asked if the beaches are going to be closed, he responded by saying that they
will be closed for 24 hours.
“That’s
like three weeks,” an unknown attendee yelled.
The
crowd’s sentiments were in accord concerning this outrageous claim, as island
residents thought about the loss of business that closing the beaches would
bring about.
Currently
the mother of victim Alex Kintner is offering a $3,000 reward for anyone who
can find her son’s killer. Fisherman Ben Quint is demanding that he be paid
$10,000 for finding the shark that may or may not be connected to these tragic
murders.
Monday, April 29, 2013
Cause of Death: Shark Attack
Amity
resident Alex Kintner was killed in what appears to have been a shark attack.
He was playing in the waters of Village Beach this afternoon around 2 when the
attack occurred.
His
body has not been recovered, but his raft floated ashore shortly after the
incident with what seems to be a large bite taken out of it.
The
mangled body of local teen Chrissie Watson was found washed up on South Beach this
morning. An autopsy is underway to determine the origins of the attacker and
the police are investigating the incident.
Watson
was last seen alive leaving a beach party with former island resident Christopher
P. Hoggenbottam III around 11 p.m. on Sunday. According to Hoggenbottam, Watson
decided to go swimming and entered the water near the South Beach Shoal bell
buoy. Hoggenbottam notified police around 6 a.m. when she did not return from her swim.
Watson,
17, was a member of Amity High School’s varsity swim team and a lifeguard at
the Amity Island YMCA pool.
Witnesses told police that the two teens had been drinking and possibly smoking
marijuana during the evening.
A
special meeting will be held today at 6 p.m. in Town Hall. The mayor, the Amity
Board of Selectmen and the police chief will be there to discuss the matter.
An
investigation is pending regarding the connection of the two deaths.
Wednesday, April 24, 2013
What is Truth?
On
Facebook (the best source of news ever!) someone posted a video where they
interviewed people that went to the Coachella Music Festival about fake bands.
The people talked about these bands as if they knew who they were, even though
they don’t exist. One of the comments on the post said how the videos could
have been dubbed over, as in the attendees’ interviews could have been real but
the questions were different (asking about actual bands). And whether this is
real or fake isn’t the interesting thin. It’s the fact that these things have
come into question.
The
sheer possibility that it can happen is quite mind-blowing. We have so much
amazing technology today that anything and everything can be manipulated. It
was funny because the thought that the video could have been altered didn’t
even occur to me. This got me thinking: what else has been altered that I’ve
seen or heard? How do we know what’s real and what isn’t? What is truth?
Somehow a Facebook post got me thinking about such profound questions. But it’s
important to think and to question everything. That’s what we as journalists
must do.
Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger
Of course as a journalist I should comment on the recent
Boston tragedy. To be honest, I don’t know much about it. But that’s because I
haven’t sought out the information. I’m not a big fan of politics or the news,
so all I’ve heard about it is what’s on Facebook and what my friends have told
me. But even with this I know a fair amount, because that’s the nature of
newsworthy things. Even without journalists people would hear about what goes
on in the world. News travels through the channel of human interaction as
naturally as water flows in a river. But I suppose the purpose of journalism is
to do it better, faster and more efficiently.
It
is these principles that were called into question concerning the coverage of
the Boston bombing. Misinformation, conspiracy theories and false accusations
littered news outlets. Twitter blew up, Facebook blew up and at first no one
knew what was going on. It’s hard to know what is fact and what is fiction.
Which leads me to my next blog post.
Monday, April 22, 2013
Many years later, a carillon--miniature bells played with a keyboard, with the music broadcast via speakers--was the center of yet another bell tower controversy. The carillon had been given to UNH in 1952 to honor the late "Dad" Henderson, longtime UNH registrar. Soon after it was installed in Thompson Hall, former UNH News Bureau Director L. Franklin ("Frank") Heald '39 began playing the carillon as a favor to Irving Bartley, a music professor. When called upon, Heald would walk up one flight of stairs, and play the noontime concert. Appointed the official UNH carillonneur in 1982, Heald continued to select the music, which by then was played by a computerized 246-bell system located in the Elliott Alumni Center and broadcast through eight speakers in the Thompson Hall tower. He also fended off complaints about the volume--since affection for the carillon seems to be inversely proportional to distance from it. (One nearby listener describes the volume as "decibels beyond reason.")
But complaints of a different sort came to a head in 1992. Some faculty and students felt it was inappropriate for a state university to broadcast Christian hymns across campus, and then-president Dale Nitzschke silenced the music while a committee studied the issue. A media storm ensued. Heald, who has a puckish sense of humor (he often wears a chef's hat when presenting alumni office staff with birthday gifts of his home-baked bread), was astonished by the furor. "I've played the carillon for 40 years, and I never received the attention that I have received in the last week for not playing it," Heald quipped at the time. Many wrote Heald to express their support. "The bells remind us of home," one alumna wrote.
Heald took the position that the carillon should play examples of the best music of all kinds. After 11 days, a compromise was reached. "Onward Christian Soldiers" was banished: other hymns, including the Alma Mater (to the tune of "Lead On, O King Eternal") stayed. The carillon music resumed.
Brooke McMullen is a freshman communication sciences and disorders major and a previous Boston Marathon runner. McMullen was running for the Best Buddies team, a non-profit organization that works with individuals with intellectual and developmental disabilities. As McMullen got to the starting line on Monday, however, she realized she had a problem.
“So, for the past week I have been limping with quadriceps muscle strain, but I wasn’t going to let the injury stop me after all the hard work,” McMullen said. “Even as I was walking to the start line I was in a lot of pain, and 26.2 miles seemed a bit farfetched.”
McMullen ran for nine miles on an injured foot before her coach saw that she was limping. He then picked up and carried her on his back for another mile to meet up with McMullen’s family.
“My family and friends were waiting for me at Natick Center, and planned to cheer me on several stops along the marathon route, but once they saw the condition I was in we took off,” McMullen said. “In the car, I argued that I wanted to at least walk the last mile so I could be there to support the rest of my team, but when we stopped the car to use the restroom I fell out of the car and couldn’t hold myself up.”
Her family took her to the Newton Wellesley Hospital to be examined. The coverage of the bombing came on TV as she was waiting in the emergency room.
“It was devastating to see such a terrible thing happen in Boston, with so many runners, children, staff, and families affected,” McMullen said. “I am so unbelievably thankful that I was in the hospital with the ones I love and not at the finish line, because if I wasn’t injured, that would have been my intended finish time.”
“So, for the past week I have been limping with quadriceps muscle strain, but I wasn’t going to let the injury stop me after all the hard work,” McMullen said. “Even as I was walking to the start line I was in a lot of pain, and 26.2 miles seemed a bit farfetched.”
McMullen ran for nine miles on an injured foot before her coach saw that she was limping. He then picked up and carried her on his back for another mile to meet up with McMullen’s family.
“My family and friends were waiting for me at Natick Center, and planned to cheer me on several stops along the marathon route, but once they saw the condition I was in we took off,” McMullen said. “In the car, I argued that I wanted to at least walk the last mile so I could be there to support the rest of my team, but when we stopped the car to use the restroom I fell out of the car and couldn’t hold myself up.”
Her family took her to the Newton Wellesley Hospital to be examined. The coverage of the bombing came on TV as she was waiting in the emergency room.
“It was devastating to see such a terrible thing happen in Boston, with so many runners, children, staff, and families affected,” McMullen said. “I am so unbelievably thankful that I was in the hospital with the ones I love and not at the finish line, because if I wasn’t injured, that would have been my intended finish time.”
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The carillon was given to UNH in 1952 to honor the late "Dad" Henderson, longtime UNH registrar. Former UNH News Bureau Director L. Franklin "Frank" Herald began playing the carillon in 1982.
The carillon was given to UNH in 1952 to honor the late "Dad" Henderson, longtime UNH registrar. Former UNH News Bureau Director L. Franklin "Frank" Herald began playing the carillon in 1982.
Sunday, April 21, 2013
Speakers Speak, Students Listen and Learn
Chris Outcalt is a good journalist. Not that I have much
experience but from what I have read of his writing, he’s pretty good. His
articles are interesting--I read all one million pages of his Murder in Vale
piece--and he seems like he has a lot of knowledge to offer.
I
thoroughly enjoyed class the day that he came to speak. It really brought
everything we’ve been learning into focus. It made me realize that these things
actually apply to our future careers as professional journalists and that the
skills we develop now will be useful later on.
Chris
brought up an interesting point. He talked about all the internships he’s done
and how they have led to jobs and it made me think about my future and how I
should be preparing for it. I need to be lining up internships and writing
articles and reading articles and…………….so many things. It almost made me panic
because I feel like I am not doing enough. But it was very beneficial to see
what a successful journalist has done, is doing and will do.
There is no me in article but there is an i
I’ve learned that you’re not supposed to put yourself into
your articles, that a journalist should write about a subject and not get
involved. Opinions = bad. But when is it appropriate? Obviously opinion pieces
will be full of--you guessed it--opinions, but what about everything else?
Where is the line?
I
personally dislike not being able to put myself in my pieces. I feel like I’m
not even a part of them. I am the writer, the one choosing which words to use,
where to put quotes and when to hit the return key, but I still don’t feel like
I’m involved. How is one supposed to stay removed enough to maintain the focus
on your subject, but involved enough to instill life and personality into an
article?
I
especially struggle with this because I normally write poems and song lyrics,
so I am used to including my own thoughts and perspectives into my writing. The
switch to this more removed sort of writing style is hard for me, but I am
getting used to it. Perhaps it’s just a matter of balance, or it goes on a
piece-by-piece basis.
Monday, April 15, 2013
Leopard Reported Missing
Danger! Danger! Leopard missing!
This morning zookeepers at the Durham Zoo discovered that their rare spotted leopard had apparently gone missing. A search of the zoo grounds is underway, but the leopard may have left the area and be walking through Durham.
“We will first search every inch of this zoo,” said Police Chief William Blair. “If possible, Fluffy will be shot with a tranquilizer gun. But if necessary, we will shoot to kill.”
The 10-year-old Romanian spotted leopard---whose name is Fluffy--is black with white spots, weighs 146 pounds and can run 60 miles per hour. A rare breed of leopard, it is the only known female spotted leopard in existence. Its kind was driven to the brink of extinction in Romania due to its appetite for children under 8 years old.
"Fluffy is a wonderful, warm, gentle cat who has never hurt anyone," said the zoo's chief zoologist, Kitty Smith. "But if these cats are cornered--or encountered on a dark night or in a dark alley--their defense is to kill, and to kill quickly."
If you encounter the leopard, the best course of action is to avoid eye contact at all costs and to slowly drop to the ground, go limp and lay still. Fluffy may sniff and lick you, but she is not likely to react violently unless she senses fear.
The Durham Police, in addition to the New Hampshire State Police and the State Wildlife Department, are scouring every inch of the zoo in order to find the leopard. If their search is futile, they will begin to search the neighborhood—moving farther and farther away from the zoo.
“We are concerned because this is a residential neighborhood with an elementary school and many daycare centers and we don’t want Fluffy wandering around after the kids get out of school,” said Blair.
Their goal is to find her by 2 p.m. before schools let out for the day. If this does not happen, it could be a “very messy night”, according to Blair. Leopards have excellent night vision and to combat this advantage, the National Guard is supplying five helicopters with infrared sensors.
“We’re gonna find this cat if it kills us,” said Blair.
Finding Fluffy is a must because not only is she a threat to the public, but she is also loved among the zoo workers and the Durham community.
“We love that cat, and we don’t want to lose her,” said zoo director Gerry Durrell.
Fellow Fluffy fan James Petronkis is equally upset. A resident of Newmarket, he comes to the zoo every day in order to see Fluffy. When he arrived this morning at 9:30, everything seemed normal. But once he got to the cage, he could tell that something was wrong.
“Fluffy usually draws the straw up into a nest when she sleeps,” said Petronkis, “but there was no nest—there wasn’t even any straw.”
Petronkis claims that he told the guard and was told to mind his own business. To get the attention of the zoo workers, he pulled the fire alarm. After a half hour in which nothing happened, Petronkis told them again. When they checked the cage, they discovered that the leopard was missing and, as Petronkis puts it, “all hell broke loose.”
Police flocked to the scene and visitors were pushed toward the exits. Petronkis hid behind a building to witness the events unfolding.
“Cops with guns drawn were everywhere,” he said. “People were screaming. It sounded like a thousand cars squealing their tires. It was mayhem.”
According to Durrell, they immediately noticed Fluffy’s absence when they opened the zoo this morning at 9:30. The door was shut and did not appear to be altered. The fencing was unbroken and everything seemed normal at the time. Fluffy was last seen in her cage last night at 9 o’clock.
“We have no idea what time Fluffy escaped or where she went,” said Durrell, who teared up while speaking to reporters. “We are doing everything we can to find her and bring her back.”
Sunday, April 14, 2013
Coming Down to the Wire
Spring
is a season that arrives and then is gone. It is an in-between time that
separates winter from summer. Everything--the whole world aka every college
ever aka UNH--is gearing up for summer vacation. Exams, projects, papers,
graduations, internships, jobs, travelling. It’s all very crazy. Students are
trying to raise their grades, do extra credit and generally making sure they
don’t f*** up.
My
problem (wow I sure have a lot of them, don’t I?) is that we only have a few
weeks left in which to complete all our articles. I’ve been pretty good about
satisfying the requirements (profile, TNH, meeting etc.) but I have my local
issue story to do and also my pass to use. I don’t know if anyone can answer
this question, but do we have a story do on the last day of class (May 6)?
If
we do, there are three articles left; if not, there are two. That means there
is not a lot of room for messing around. I definitely need to do my local issue
story for next week and I am starting to feel the pressure to fit everything
into this little slot we like to call Finals Month. Okay, I just made that up
but it is fitting. Everyone I have talked to has a ridiculous amount of work to
do and I’m pretty sure it’s not going to let up until school has finished.
Let’s
do this!
Registration Problems
When the bitter hand of winter lightens its grasp on the UNH
campus and warm days tempt students with the promise of summer, you know what’s
coming. It is that time of year again, ladies and gentlemen. Registration time.
I,
personally, find a certain amount of pleasure in choosing my classes. Making
one’s schedule is akin to solving a puzzle. It can be complex and challenging,
but in the end--when all the pieces have fallen into place--it is ever so satisfying.
It
is usually this way for me, but Fall 2013 is quickly becoming the most
difficult puzzle yet. This is due to one reason: Advanced Newswriting, also
known as ENGL 622. You see, I have to take this class next semester because it
is a prerequisite for just about every other journalism class. The class in
itself (not that I know of at least) is not the problem. The problem is that it
is only offered on Thursdays from 9:40 to 11:30. Oddly enough, this two hour
period conflicts with all the other classes that I was thinking about taking.
Why?????????
Good-bye
interesting English classes that I so wanted to take.
I
guess that’s what happens when you get older. As you progress in your college
career, there are less classes that you need to take and less time to take
them. I am also studying abroad next spring, so I have to take certain classes
before I am a senior.
Obviously
this is not a huge problem, but it is annoying.
Looks
like I’m stuck with Intro to Puppetry.
Sunday, April 7, 2013
The Not So Scary New Hampshire
I went to a TNH meeting! Yay me. Yes this is another post
about TNH.
It
was really weird. To say the least.
I
practically ran there from the gym (red-faced and pony tail whipping back and
forth) but I made it on time. All I knew about this endeavor was the time, the
room and that I had to be there for my journalism class. Other than that, I
didn’t know what to expect.
It
was oddly informal. An oval table in a room in the MUB, chairs scattered about
and people trailing in at random. I thought it would be more like a court
hearing, all tense silence and strict guidelines. It was in the sense that
writers were on one side and editors were on another but other than that it was
fairly relaxed. To start, we went around the room and said our names and major.
In addition there was an icebreaker: which UNH Facebook page do you like the
best? Most people said UNH Confessions (understandably so), but the interesting
thing was that this icebreaker actually did what it was supposed to do: it
broke the ice. People started talking about funny posts they had seen on the
pages and in no time it was like a normal college kid conversation. All laughs
and that’s what she said jokes.
After
we had gotten back on topic, each editor introduced their pitches and tossed
them onto the table. I didn’t know how people would get their stories but I did
not expect that it would just be a free-for-all. When everyone had pitched
their stories, it was pretty much like “Go!” Everyone started grabbing papers
and it was first come first serve.
In
conclusion, those TNH people are cray.
A Ride Through the Town
I just went to my friend’s concert and as I was listening to
him play, I thought about writing (per usual). If I had to write a story in the
half hour that I was there, what would I write about? (As a disclaimer I would
like to include the fact that I had recently finished my article and so was
still in the crazy journalistic mode where all I can think about is
writingwritingwritingwriting.) There was a game on the television, the bands
strumming along on the stage, the odd-looking teenagers playing pool. Any of
those could be the subject of an article or several articles depending on what
angle you use.
Once
you get in the mode of constantly thinking about what you could write an
article about, it becomes addicting. Everything is a possible topic and your
mind becomes a whirlwind of interviews, word counts, inverted pyramids and
delayed leads. For instance when we were driving back from the concert, I was
still pondering all of this.
Cue
paragraph of intensely profound reflection.
As
the car makes its way through the streets of Boston, I realized something: the
world is pretty damn huge. There’s so many people to meet, so many places to
go, so many things to see. There should be no shortage of stories to write.
Just in this one city there are endless possibilities. The past, the present,
the future. An ongoing string of time. An ongoing string of consciousness.
Everything existing all at once.
Saturday, March 30, 2013
Reading and Writing Are Hopelessly Intertwined
I
just realized I actually have more to say about TNH. Another point for the
coward in me is that I don’t read TNH. Or any newspaper for that matter. Nor do
I watch any news channel. I am kind of a paradoxical journalist in that sense.
The only thing I do do is comb through the Boston Globe (but only because we
are required to).
Yes
I realize that this is a weird thing to do. Or rather to not do. But the truth
is that I am just not interested in the majority of things that are covered in
newspapers. I care about issues and all that but I just find that the way they
are presented is horrifically dull. I start reading something and then my mind
just wanders. Perhaps this is an ADD problem?
But
what does this mean for my supposed future career? Maybe the fact that I don’t
spend my free time reading articles means that I shouldn’t be a journalist.
What are the rules for this type of thing?
Another
theory of mine is that I just haven’t found my niche. I feel like I would enjoy reading more human
interest/feature stories, which is the kind of article I like writing as well. So
perhaps after I post this blog I will do that. Except I have so much more
homework.
Rain
check?
Writing Until I Die
When
I read Brittany Shaefer’s most recent post, I was reminded of the fact that I
have been thinking of TNH recently. I was searching aimlessly through the UNH
website and I came upon something interesting. TNH is hiring! Oh, that’s pretty
cool. The deadline is tomorrow. Not cool. I didn’t write for my high school’s
newspaper (mostly because it didn’t have a newspaper) but now that I’m
officially a journalist (student), I have a newfound interest. The fact that I
am going to be studying abroad next spring so I would only get to do it for a
semester coupled with the fact that I am a little scared of even applying, has
been deterring me for the past several hours.
I
could apply. I might not even get the job. But I don’t really know how being a
writer for TNH works. And I may just like my hesitation get the better of me.
Unlike
Brittany, I was swayed by the stipend that comes with working for them. Yes
like everybody I love to write but I have so many other things going on in my
life that to write for free, go to my classes and do my homework, make money on
the side and maybe have a little fun, would be a little too much to handle.
So
maybe senior year I will get the courage to apply. But until then, I’ll be
writing until I die.
Monday, March 25, 2013
High-Speed Car Chase
Screams permeated the air of the subway train as it
barreled past its intended stop and on toward an unknown destination.
Passengers frantically knocked on the door of the conductor’s room, asking if
everything was alright. But instead of an affirmation that all was okay, they
were greeted by a gunman holding a pistol.
“We tried to see what was going on and when we saw
that something was wrong, one man took charge and confronted the gunman,” said
passenger Luna di’Fleur. “He got shot and after that everybody started
screaming. It was chaos.”
Meanwhile, on the street below, a car was following
the subway’s progression. In it was police officer Popeye Doyle, who had apprehended
a civilian’s car in order to pursue the shooter. The car was severely battered
after hitting two other cars and a wall but Doyle didn’t let anything stop him.
Swerving from one lane to another and nearly running over several pedestrians,
he eventually caught up with the subway when it crashed into another train.
Witness Accuracy: 8
Wednesday, March 20, 2013
The Pen is the Sword
It’s
odd the power that journalists have. You wouldn’t think they could hold so much
in their hands, what with their pens getting in the way and such. But they can.
Though they aren’t politicians or celebrities or royalty (usually), the
decisions they make could potentially affect a lot of people.
It
is the task of journalists to inform the world’s inhabitants of what goes on.
They-should I be saying we?-cover wars and elections, debates and meetings.
Everything really. How else would we know anything about anything without them?
They report on so many influential topics and the manner in which they do so could
change history.
The
Vietnam War was the first war that had a lot of media coverage and allowed
Americans-for the first time in history-to be aware of the real situation in
Vietnam. Because they had a better understanding of what was happening during
the war, their opinions were more well-informed.
If
journalists for some reason decided to boycott their occupation, we would all
be screwed. With the internet it’s a little different, but back in the old days
(aka like a few decades ago), newspapers and the radio were the only ways that
people found out about things.
There
will always be a place for journalists in the world. Unless we all decide to
sever ourselves from civilization.
The Eternal Question of What is News
I
think the interesting thing about news (which I often times forget about) is
that it can be so varied. I usually think of news as all the boring articles in
the newspaper that talk about congressional hearings and government spending
and things that I generally don’t care about. But then I listen to something
like NPR and I’m reminded that news encompasses a lot more. It is opinions
about interesting topics and events-both locally and internationally-which
could mean everything from parades and concerts to benefits and meetings. It is
pop culture and world history and the latest technology.
I keep having to remind myself that news covers just about everything in life and that’s the beauty of it. Some kind of news appeals to everyone-which is good news for me (that’s definitely a pun) because I have had a little trouble with the whole news thing due to my preconceived about its definition. But news is so much more than we could lock down in any definition. What is news keeps changing because our world and ourselves are constantly changing.
Monday, March 18, 2013
I Have a Dream
The voice of Martin Luther King Jr. had all the power of an
earthquake when he gave his
“I Have a Dream” speech Wednesday at the Lincoln Memorial, in which he called
for an end to racism in the United States. The crowd of more than 250,000 civil
rights supporters listened in quiet reverence to King’s speech, at times shouting
frantic yeses and clapping with passionate support.
“1963
is not an end but a beginning,” said King.
Monday, March 4, 2013
Meeting Lead
It may result in many ruined Saturdays for parents and students alike if the School Board approves a new policy that would require students with disciplinary problems to come to school for a Saturday morning session.
Sunday, February 24, 2013
To Delay or Not to Delay
Leads can be a tricky thing. Much like trying to
come up with a topic to write about, trying to figure out how to begin your
article is the hardest part. Sometimes it’s easier to dive in and start
writing, leaving the formation of your lead until the end. But sometimes it’s
only after crafting the perfect lead that a writer is able to continue with the
story.
The
principal strength of summary leads is that they are very informative. They’re
straight to the point, they communicate the important information effectively
and immediately, and the reader only needs that one paragraph to know what the
article is about. The problem, though, is that they can be boring and
unoriginal. The typical news article is written with a summary lead and
sometimes I would like something different.
Delayed
leads are usually far more interesting. They draw the reader in and make them
want to continue reading to see what the article is about. The danger in this
type of lead is that it can be confusing. The enigmatic quality that is usually
the appeal of delayed leads can also cause the reader to stop reading if the
first paragraph sounds too random.
I
think it all depends on the article. Certain types of articles require a
summary lead while others work best with a delayed lead.
When
I first read “Mud, massages, mouse on St. Lucia”, I was a little unsure where
the article was going, but I kept reading to figure it out and it ultimately
worked for the piece.
Here
is lead:
“We
had only been at Rendezvous, our “couples” resort, for an hour, and we were
flunking Romance 101. Maybe it had been a mistake to book the romantic
candlelight dinner on the beach for our first evening here. The wind kept
blowing out our candles so it was too dark to read the menus. Plus, we were
famished — all we’d had to eat all day were airplane snacks.”
Saturday, February 23, 2013
The Profane, The Sarcastic, The Humorous
Journalism comes in
many forms, a fact that is proven more each and every day. One form that I have
recently begun to explore is Gonzo journalism, which can be accredited to
Hunter S. Thompson circa 1970 (see previous post). It’s a combination of journalism
and fiction that is partly based on the personal experience of the writer.
Thompson was inspired by William Faulkner’s idea that, "The
best kind of fiction is truer than any kind of journalism."
I
find this rather interesting because the subjectivity of this style appeals to
me immensely. Traditional journalism takes a detached and objective approach
and is focused on getting the hard facts. Gonzo journalism strives to capture
the personality of the topic in addition to the topic itself. It utilizes
emotion and experience as writing tools. Sarcasm, humor, exaggeration and
profanity are also frequently employed in this style, which tends to “tell it
like it is”.
The
more I research Gonzo journalism, the more passionate my opinion becomes
concerning the rules (or lack thereof) of writing. I think people should express
themselves more freely in their writing and not try to fit into a mold. I’m not
saying that they should go to the lengths that Hunter S. Thompson did in Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas, but I do
believe that we-as writers- should not be afraid to tell a story as we see fit.
Non-Creative-Fiction
Last
semester I took ENGL 501 Intro to Creative Nonfiction. I had no idea what the
class would be like. The name in itself confused me. Creative. Nonfiction.
Aren’t those supposed to be separate things?
After
finishing the class, I had a better grasp of what creative nonfiction is. I
realized that nonfiction doesn’t have to be written in a dull or stagnant
manner. The lines between creative writing and nonfiction writing don’t have to
be so black and white. They can meld and blend and merge and bend. In writing,
there is only one rule. There are no rules.
In
Chapter 6 of our textbook, it talks about how reporter Tom Wolfe popularized
his feature-writing style, in which journalists borrowed techniques from
novelists. Another central figure in this “New Journalism” movement was Hunter
S. Thompson, who wrote Fear and Loathing
in Las Vegas, which I read in my ENGL 501 class.
This
was a very unique book. The story’s plot is crazy enough but what struck me
most was Thompson’s writing style. It had never occurred to me that you could write
news in such an interesting way. To be honest, I had always thought of
reporting as cut-and-dry. But after reading Fear
and Loathing, I was pleasantly surprised to find out that was not the case.
Monday, February 18, 2013
A Softer Lead
Even to this day former Rhode Island governor Don Caricieri remembers the tense moments that families endured at a hotel while waiting for word that their relatives' remains had been identified and how people came together to support each other.
"At a time of our state's worst tragedy, in some sense, it was our people's finest hour," he recounted.
Now, as the 10-year anniversary of the nightclub fire that killed 100 people approaches, survivors as well as the families of the victims will gather on Sunday for a memorial.
"At a time of our state's worst tragedy, in some sense, it was our people's finest hour," he recounted.
Now, as the 10-year anniversary of the nightclub fire that killed 100 people approaches, survivors as well as the families of the victims will gather on Sunday for a memorial.
Summary Lead
The world suffered the loss of its most famous talking bird- Alex, an African gray parrot, who died last week at age 31 of natural causes.
Friday, February 15, 2013
I Pray to Thee, O Writer of Mine Sustenance
I want to be Michael Pollan.
Maybe
not the middle-aged man part, but definitely the food journalist part. He is a
foodie, a writer and an intellectual, which is a combination I have been
striving for my entire life. The Botany
of Desire, The Omnivore’s Dilemma, and In
Defense of Food are just a few of the books he has authored, all of which I
have read and all of which I regard as religious texts (food is pretty much a
religion, as is his writing style).
What
I enjoy about Michael Pollan’s writing is that it isn’t boring. I’m used to the
fast-paced, intelligible world of fiction, so it takes a certain kind of
non-fiction to hold my attention. He writes in a completely atypical sort of manner,
one that is surprising and balanced. Surprising in the sense that his language
seems unbounded by the harshly constructed peripheries that plague most prose (he
uses sarcasm and irony) and balanced because he writes in a way that is both
thought-provoking and uncomplicated.
I’ve
grown up idolizing Michael Pollan; he is partly responsible for my choice of
career. When I thought about what to study in college, I was stumped. I liked
food, but I didn’t want to be a chef. And I liked writing, but I didn’t want to
be a novelist. Then I realized: why don’t I just do what Michael Pollan does
and combine them? He writes about food for prestigious magazines, is
interviewed for movies like Food Inc.,
and actually seems to make a difference in the world.
The
future of food writing- as most sectors of literature tend to be- is uncertain.
But because there are iconic figures such as Michael Pollan, I have something
to shoot for. He is paving the way for food writers like me and when I grow up,
I will follow in his footsteps- fighting for a more sustainable gastronomic future.
A Passion for Passion Pit
“That you never leave
Ohhoo
ohooo ooo, never
That
you never would believe
That
you never, no....”
And
so begins the song “Constant Conversations” by the indie rock band Passion Pit.
Hailing from Cambridge, MA, the band has released an EP and two studio albums
since they formed in 2007. They are currently on tour to promote their 2012
album Gossamer-which features the hit
singles “Constant Conversations” and “Take a Walk”.
After
playing shows at Boston’s Agganis Arena and New York City’s Madison Square
Gardens, the band will make stops in Canada and South America before returning
to the United States for Coachella in April and the Bonnaroo Music Festival in
June.
I
had the distinct pleasure of attending a Passion Pit concert on February 13th
at the State Theatre in Portland, ME. Located on Congress Street, the historic
theatre features Art Deco aesthetics and intricate furnishings such as wrought
iron stairs, lofty ceilings, bronze doors and tapestries. An exquisite blend of
the new and the old, it was the ideal venue for the irresistibly catchy tunes.
Dancing. Jumping. Swaying. Singing. From Icona Pop through Matt & Kim and into Passion Pit, the energy of the crowd was utterly palpable. It rose from a rumbling simmer to a frenzied pulsation as the fans and the musicians collided in a perfect harmony of synchronicity.
Dancing. Jumping. Swaying. Singing. From Icona Pop through Matt & Kim and into Passion Pit, the energy of the crowd was utterly palpable. It rose from a rumbling simmer to a frenzied pulsation as the fans and the musicians collided in a perfect harmony of synchronicity.
Maybe
for Passion Pit it was just another night in another city, but for those
moments when everyone at the concert fused into one collective being, it was
like we were all there for some greater purpose.
Where Do You Want To Live?
It is on Wednesday,
February 20th that Housing Reapplications and the $500 Housing
Deposit must be submitted. The University of New Hampshire requires students to
meet this deadline or else they will not be able to partake in the apartment
selection process for next year. Their only other option is to add their name
to the Housing Waitlist.
February
20th. Wait. That’s in five days.
Due
to its imminent nature, this is big news for UNH students that live in the
Gables or the Woodsides. And so campus is buzzing as people discuss where-and
with who-they want to live for fall semester 2013.
I,
personally, have thought little about the matter. I only moved in to my Gables
apartment three weeks ago and am still getting used to the location and my
suitemates. Next school year seems awfully far away, but for the Department of
Housing, things need to be decided sooner than later. Because it takes so long
to place everyone into the appropriate housing, applications must be submitted
months ahead of time. That leaves us UNH students scrambling to get our lives
together.
Whether
you’re squatting your apartment, moving to a new complex or heading off campus,
you better decide quick. The deadline is approaching swiftly.
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